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laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
cry cry why lie? fear consumed you am i right? but instead of facing it you moan and groan crying about how.. you wanna be alone (edit) melodramas for the mundane tiny conflicts turn to high strain i dont get it such small things with such deep impact such silly people such little confidence intact one mishap and thats it towel in the ring you quit (edit) whats with that? nobody in this world is ever weak of heart we were born warriors right from the start why else would the human race be a race apart? inside you, you hold the key to your destiny only so far fate can take you, ya see. the rest is up to you and its not hard pick and choose win or lose doesnt matter as long as you face it understand? dont cry just survive...... [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-18-2002 03:58 AM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
This was excellent...It showed your raw emotions and what you are feeling, although I can somewaht relate, probably to a lesser degree though... Very Good ~Lisa |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It sounds like you have a lot of anger in this piece...your words were bold and powerful. You really expressed urself wonderfully. Amazing job iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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