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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2002-03-30 01:37 AM

Skies turning the sweetest shades of blue
bringing out the blueness in your eyes
the moon and all the stars remind me of you
and for some reason apart from you my heart cries

The roses were red and every sky was blue
hold tight the thoughts that dreams are real
that someday I'll awake in the arms of you
and you'll know exactly how I really feel

Water crashes on the shoreline crashes at our feet
laughs fill the air and sand runs through our toes
as the gulls fly over head our 2 hearts meet
a fairy tale is how the story goes

the roses were the brightest shade of red
but it took only a second for the colors to disapear
faded to simplicity with the three words you said
the only three words I'll ever need to hear

Time stop let the seconds slowly drift away
hold me tighter than life itself this night
hold me until the break of the oncoming day
let us only be awakened by the morning light

Part 2

Roses were red
the skies were blue
time stood still
when I met you
thoughts come
and thoughts go
all the same
my love I know
like an eagle soaring on the wind
so my heart soars for you
like the night awaits the dawn
so I await my life with you
wake up from sleep and look in these eyes
wipe away the tears of former lies
here I sit and here I stay
awaiting, awaiting what you'll say
Roses were red
the skies were blue
but all their beauty faded
the day I met you
fellings have come
but they will never go
for my love for you
is all I'll ever know
I'd like you to say you'd be my wife
I'd like you to say yes
that you'll be mine for life
I'd like the life only few achieve
I'd like love that is more beautiful than the stars
and I'd like all of that to be ours....

this goes out to allison um sweetie I love you and well I'm sorry things haven't been going quiet right recently but know I love you none the less....and in a year or so I'll marry you your mother permitting lol

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-03-30 01:51 AM

why do we always end up fighting when we talk to each other. anyways good poem

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-03-30 11:29 AM

GREAT!!! Really a very good job..both parts!! Hehehe...i really enjoyed this..thanks for sharing!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-04-18 03:47 AM

the_rescue-
This is a very beautifully written piece.
I really enjoyed reading it, and I could
feel the love in your words.
Wonderfully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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