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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2002-03-29 04:07 PM

Golden hunny locks,
Admist dark maple strands.
It is the hair that falls around my creamy face,
With a slight sand colored tan.
Crystals dazzle happily,
Admist a glorification of blues and greens.
My eyes brightness kiss the sky,
As the waves of colors glisten and gleems.
Pink blush lips so soft,
Silk and satin combination.
Indentations randomly live upon them,
Living only for the touch of your lips confrontation.
My breath lives in me,
Flowing with the sound of waves brushing against the sand.
In and out without a care,
Gently gliding sounds flowing in the air.

Today is the day of beauty,
Upon which each flower blooms to its brightest.
The sun shines and presents to us its warmth,
The wind dies down so it touches ur skin only the slightest.
Sweet songs of the birds in the air,
The scent of spring join your breath of life.
You lay upon the open grass,
You now see everythings going to be alright.

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2002-03-29 04:33 PM

Beautiful, absolutely!!

*out of adjectives, etc.* but I guess that pretty much sums it up,eh?

Kristen

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2002-04-04 04:39 PM

"Today is the day of beauty,
Upon which each flower blooms to its brightest."

"You lay upon the open grass,
You now see everythings going to be alright."

"As the waves of colors glisten and gleems.
Pink blush lips so soft,
Silk and satin combination.
Indentations randomly live upon them,
Living only for the touch of your lips confrontation."

Shugah, this is one of the most beautiful pieces I've rear here! It's simply just DAMN lovely.

I'm trying to put words to it.... the depth of the words, the style, the flow, the feel of it.... it's just quite lovely. I must say..... I truely did enjoy this piece. Again, I did indeed enjoy it.

~ Titus

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2002-04-04 05:37 PM

Very descriptive and quite beautiful.
I like it.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-04 06:37 PM

Thanks guys for your replies

Im glad you enjoyed it so much titus!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Acies

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since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2002-05-07 11:06 AM

This is so beautiful and calming
You people have grown to be excellent writers
Specially with you Shugar
keep it up and keep sharing
I would love to read more of your work
Thanks for the excellent read
~*standing ovation*~

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-05-08 01:42 PM

i like ur poem it's adorable keep'em commin awrigh baby. well peace out baby gurl.

from dunphy

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

7 posted 2002-05-08 11:58 PM

Well I haven't been on here for awhile but I've really missed reading your poems and this piece is awsome just like the rest.Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2002-05-23 10:24 AM

Thanks so much lauren and everyone else who replied

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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