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Impulse Pro Junior Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 25Mass,USA |
I have dreams of tossing and turning Crashing and burning It’s very concerning Even though they are just dreams I can hear those awful screams Sometimes I feel like I cannot move It takes me a while for my body to sooth Sitting in bed looking at the wall When I hear my conscious Could it be because of the sins I have done If it is it’s not very fun Sometimes I have been a problem child But my sins have been very mild Nightmares can be very scary I do not need that nightmare fairy Justin M. Massachusetts, USA A.K.A Impulse Pro |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, this wuz pretty cool, nice imagery. good job, wanna see more.  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
great poem...I hope that you start having good dreams soon!! great Write ~Lisa |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Dreams are weird things..sometimes they can be all too real...good job  iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice job, I'm glad I don't remember my dreams anymore Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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