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Teen Poetry #5

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Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-03-26 02:42 PM

life can bring you so much stress
but it's not easy to clean the mess.
a lot of times i have been hurt
all the tear drops in my eyes burn.
i don't know what to do anymore
why does life have no cure?
evrything in the world is so tuff
with life it self i had enough.
i allways ask my self why me
i don't understand if it was ment to be.
i feel like my life's apawt
i feel like i have no hawt.
is it because in my life i have no one
is it because i'm ugly son?
their's a lot of things about life i want to know
i wish wrigt now just let it flow.

by kevin reid
aka dunphy
18 m massachusetts usa

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-03-26 06:44 PM

Hey, I really liked this. It was honest, and it was beautiful. Well done. *hugs*

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-03-27 06:04 PM

All too truthful...believe me hun thera are a million things about life i wanna kno too...hope you find out everything your curious anout

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2002-03-27 08:59 PM

hey love this is an awesome poem. *feels bad* i only wish i had said yes.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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