Teen Poetry #5 |
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Again |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
You call me on the phone last week, saying "Alyssa, I got suspended again." I ask you why and you just say "Some guy was messing with me and I hit him." Again. I remember a time when I first met you you used to be a peacefull person. I ask you why you're so angry now and you just say "It wasn't my fault. He started it." Again. I ask you would you ever hit me you say you don't know. I say "if I ever made you really mad, would you hit me?" you say "I'd have to punch a wall, but I wouldn't hit you." Again. I'm not returning your calls anymore, I haven't paged you in a week. I can't deal with the way you're feeling, I can't cope with this negativity. Again. This is a Justin rant.I'm not talking to him anymore, I've given up for good, I've got a new guy to talk to, to be with, to care about.I'm fed up. Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
You are good for giving up on him, hes not worth it... It you ever feel like you cant keep up your strength, or if he ever touches you, email me... ~Lisa |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I liked the structure of this poem. Ending each verse with Again. It made for a really good poem. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Very good write. Again. ![]() Kielo |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know its hard but i think you did the right thing by getting away from him..i wouldnt wanna see you get hurt ::hugs::...your very strong!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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