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Teen Poetry #5

Dreamless Ruins

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

0 posted 2002-03-24 04:26 PM

You did me wrong,
Have to be strong.
Never taught to stand on my own feet,
Tired, weakend, alone I've been beat.
I can't take this any longer,
I got to be much stronger.
Call me Superman though I'm not,
In my little cell I slowly rot.
Nothing is ever as it seems,
Crushed and murdered all my dreams.
You hate the only thing I've ever known,
Never had anyone always walked alone.
Enraged slammed into a dark cloud haze,
Struggle to find a reason to stay in this maze.
The fire in my heart burned out,
Darkness falls and never a doubt.
They'll never throw it back to me,
If only they could just look and see.
Everyone has a Mercyless Fate,
Waiting to see if God's gonna blow the gate.
Living in the ashes of Dreamless Ruins,
And what I have is stolen Fate.
Look into The Eyes Of The Dragon,
Sending Bloody Tears From Me To You.
With a Dark Angel Haunting You,
You better Fear The Dragon.
And then Look Into The Eyes Of The Unseen Angel.
Cause you're living in the ashes of Dreamless Ruins ..

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2002-03-25 06:11 PM

I love this!
The imagery and the flow
is great.
Totally my style!
Thank you for posting this!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-03-26 02:19 PM

This was such an amazing poem and VERY well written...great job!! I liked it a lot

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2002-03-27 12:44 PM

This was really good. Reminded me of something I'd try to write. I can enjoyed this
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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