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Starr
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0 posted 2002-03-24 05:15 AM


Honestly I was helping my grandmother with her plants when this came to me..
It's not all that but oh well

With the grace of a nobleman
It glides through the parties
Always wanting the kings' attention
With the persistence of a knight
It goes though the toughest fight
Prevailing as the winner
Knowing, winning is it's only option
Yes, survival of the fittest
For without it's grace
It cannot move
Without the kings' attention
It cannot grow
The toughest fights
Is going up before all others
For this is the life of an orchid

Misty

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

© Copyright 2002 Sheriza Mahabirsingh - All Rights Reserved
keoni
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Up in the mountains in the NFC
1 posted 2002-03-24 12:34 PM


This was interesting. I liked it. I was suprised at the end to know that you were talking about an orchid.
Jon

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"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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the wonderful land of oz
2 posted 2002-03-24 04:13 PM


intriguing.

/gwen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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3 posted 2002-03-26 02:15 PM


different and interesting but i liked it a lot!! good job

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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