Teen Poetry #5 |
Caught Again |
peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Hey everyone...Right now I'm going through a hard time with my family and some other things so I started writing again..So just leave me some comments on how I did... Watching the pengulum swing, While my faith is slowly dying, Knowing I've done it again, I can't help myself, I'm not trusted anymore, There's no reason not to be, No one seems to understand, Confusion and frustation has taken over, Nothing will be the same, Only because I got caught again.. ~*~Never take anything for granted~*~ |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I know this feeling all to well....you did a great job of expressing it... Great Write ~Lisa |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
what a time in my life for you to write this. i can so relate. ouch. it hit deep. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh I dont' know what to say to this. I honestly don't know what to say.... *hugs* Hopelessly in love |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
jess, wow, i feel ur pain gurl, this expressed ur feelings well. i dont know the story behind this yet but i have a feeling u'll tell me when u want 2. lylan~ ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
iss alwaz good to keep yo expretionz when you be feelin down you know wuss tha bess meditation keep it alive go fo tha dive you know it will arrive. juss keep it open you be in motion until tha day it will be poseted. well youk now what i'm tryin to say when tha day you be unda tha rain juss keep up you got tha luck. well i gotta go now i like that writtin of yoz keep it up i'm tellin ya you be doin a good deed. keep'em postin. love kevin reid aka dunphy 18 m massachusetts |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Great write. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im sorry that this is happening in your life...::hugs:: stay strong iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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