Teen Poetry #5 |
All i want to do is sleep |
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
[A]moment in time lasting so long [L]oving each second i can sing to my own song [L]ost amidst trying to be strong [I]n the end i just try to hang on [W]ondering what next will make me break [A]waiting the signs predicting my fate [N]ever knowing which road to take [T]orchured every moment that i spend awake [T]oo little to late i tried to be re-esembled [O]nly to find the treatment makes me tremble [D]ont know what to think or what my thoughts resemble [O]nly lost in my body, my holy temple [I] know tomorrow will come and i will awake [S]till feeling as though my mind is fake [S]omehow i hold on very tight [L]ifting my emotions with all my might [E]very thought confused not knowing wrong from right [E]ven my goals are out of sight [P]lease god i pray, just let me sleep through the night.. iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Oh God, I know the feeling all to well.... But judging from my experience...and this great poem! Insomnia makes awesome poetry!!!! Great Job! ~Lisa |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is such a cool poem! I hope you finally got to sleep through the night! Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Really awsome piece I can relate to it perfectly. Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more. Lauren |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I have to admit, usually I don't like poems that that spell things out like that. It seems boring, but this was AWESOME! I forgot that you were spelling something and just read it, and I really liked it. Good thing I don't follow my first impression... Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Well im glad you enjoyed it Thanks everyone for taking the time to read it! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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