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Teen Poetry #5

Eyes of a Stranger

Starr
Member

since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

0 posted 2002-03-21 12:46 PM

Looking deep within
Through the thickest of mists
Staring into the unknown
Expecting something
Yet seeing nothing
Feeling lost in the darkness
This empty space seems to grow
But how could truly this be?
These are the eyes of a stranger
Yet, there's a mirror in front of me

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

[This message has been edited by Starr (03-21-2002 12:48 PM).]

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-03-21 03:33 PM

wow =)

A life without love…is no life at all.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-03-21 03:44 PM

"These are the eyes of a stranger
Yet, there's a mirror in front of me"

I completely understand where you're coming from hun. There are so many times where i look into a mirror and see a complete stranger staring back at me..::hugs::...great job!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-03-21 04:37 PM

"These are the eyes of a stranger
Yet, there's a mirror in front of me"

I know the feeling...all to well...great write...

~Lisa

Starr
Member

since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

4 posted 2002-03-21 10:57 PM

Yes, sometimes I wonder who I am.. this time I put it on paper...
Thanks guys at least I Know I'm not alone.

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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