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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-25 03:37 PM

shall we dance
do I dare take the chance
to love you again
will i let love begin
where it never ended
or do I keep myself defended

shall we go to that place
where once again I can see your face
under the pale moon light
where every thing seemed oh so right
where I was yours and you were mine,
though the world collapsed we were fine

shall we take yet another chance
seek out a thing called romance
do we try something that once has failed
and in the end say our love hath prevailed
or do we sit staring at the wall
waiting for one another to call

shall I call you sweetheart
and say nothing can break us apart
call you darling everytime I see you
laugh at every little thing you do
or shall I just call you nothing
continue to dwell on a past something

shall I give up or continue on
will this love I feel ever be gone
do you know what you mean to me
if just once you could only see
you would know that I love you so
that through the storms I would never let you go

these things I will never know unless I try
If you said NO I swear my heart would cry
the day you left me for another it hurt so bad
I didn't know whether to love you or to be mad
but in the end it was love that prevailed
even though our relationship had failed
Ok as Always stupid white boy falls for girl he knows he can't get over lol.

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-06-25 03:53 PM

Great work as always from you The Rescue, I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-25 06:21 PM

this is incredibly sweet.....

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-06-25 07:15 PM

Hey,

Very nice! the rhymeing spell that right I can never remember how to spell it :'( oh well back to the poem it's great keep it up. Until your next poem

-- Linc

       "Blood Moon"
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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-25 07:26 PM

Wow.. This is very, very sweet. It's a tough situation... I know how heartbreak feels. Not fun, huh? *hug* Keep writing.. it tends to help the pain when it comes to matters of the heart. I really enjoyed this. Keep posting your work and sharing it with us

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

5 posted 2001-06-25 10:26 PM

I always love your poetry...glood job...ohpe to read more soon...

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-06-26 03:58 PM

Raw emotions being expressed in this piece. I do believe than all guys do that though. Not just a specific race

keep it up and thanks for the read

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-26 11:36 PM

Great job here man. I really enjoyed this one. Keep them coming.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

8 posted 2001-06-27 11:48 AM

I liked this one a lot jimmy. It was very bitter sweet. i'm sorry about that situation..i feel your pain. hope it works out

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

9 posted 2001-06-28 06:20 AM

Sad yet so strong at the same time.
Nicely written.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

10 posted 2001-06-28 11:58 AM

So sad, but still very good. *hugz* I'm sorry you are in this situation, and I hope everything turns out OK.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

scout
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since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

11 posted 2001-06-28 12:04 PM

"I know the plans I have for you, and it hurts sometimes, to see you cry" - waterdeep

trust in God (He's got a plan), or you can be like me and be celibate for the rest of your life (or until i fall in love and kiss the bride, but seriously the chances of that happening?? It would be easier for a Rich Man to get into Heaven then it would be for me to marry "the girl")

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

12 posted 2001-07-05 01:56 AM

This was really sweet- Great job Rescue.

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

13 posted 2001-07-05 02:47 AM

This was really sweet...I hope everything turns out for the best...its a hard thing to go through...good poem though...
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends

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