Teen Poetry #5 |
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Crawl To Me |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... ![]() |
Slowly, you crawl to me Desperately wanting to be truly be you. A need for you to be true. With love, I offer my ear With hope, any good cheer. Over in the corner, a keg of beer. Along with my pet Beaver Seer. Always a hug at ready, forever we sing a medley. Get as close as you feel able, rest the bones in my house stables. Rest here in my arms, allow me to work my charms. Merely for the magic of the moment, come with me, join my constant movement. With me, get some hope. For I long to see you float. Through the dark and through the light, we can take this journey to great heights. Slowly, you crawl to me Desperately wanting to be truly be you. A need for you, to you, to be true. 3 -20- 02 [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-21-2002 03:00 AM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Another homerun TITUS!!!!!!!!! WOOHOOOO Great Poem...I loved it.... ~Lisa |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I love it! The message is clear, but you played around with it some, which I thought made it even more interesting. Where are you?! Get online! I'm leaving tomorrow so I might not see you again for a long time. Talk to you soon. (hopefully) Cela passera. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
AND TITUS DID IT AGAIN LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!!!!! ***CROWD GOES WILD***...Yet another brilliant piece!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
HI Titus! See... I told you I'd be online occasionally. *hugs* Very awesome poem. Talk to you later. I'm sick of the acting I can't seem to stop, and I'm sick of the people who all expect me to fit what they belive of me. I'm sick of everyone, includi |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Nice, indeed..need I say more..my words fail me now as I'm crawling upon this broken glass of what used to be my soul..but anyways enjoyed it...*hugs* Kris |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Really good ![]() ![]() Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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