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Teen Poetry #5

Cinderella (new twist)

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-17 04:10 AM

New year
No glass slippers
Just a new attitude
Bringing it out in style
In 2002
Party all night
Flirt with the guys
She's still single
So it's okay
To look twice
Prince Charming
Turned out to be a real jerk
But hey that's okay
That guy in the corner
Is looking pretty cute
No need for
A Fairy Godmother
'Cos hey she's got herself
Independant as a woman can be
She's Cinderella
Bringing it out in style
In 2002

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-03-17 04:34 AM

lol...nice twist...thx for posting =)

A life without love…is no life at all.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-17 01:47 PM

This was very good, if only I was Cinderella....*day dreams*

Ok Great Write, ang Im proud that you are an Independent woman...

~Lisa

ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
Junior Member

since 2001-12-24

Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol

3 posted 2002-03-17 03:19 PM

hey, that was cool, really peppy, lol, i like that kinda stuff

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-03-17 06:56 PM

YEAH!!! RIGHT ON!!!! No wussy Cinderelly here!

I am a rabid horse.

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

5 posted 2002-03-17 07:48 PM

there's something so appealing i just can't put my finger on it.

probably because i'm such a feminist, but hey.

i'm really digging this piece.

honestly.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-03-17 09:32 PM

Hahahahaha.... I love it.

Well done, my friend.

~ Titus

My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity.

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2002-03-18 11:26 AM

i liek ur poem iss phat i like dat kinda stuf my self i know i couldn't come up wit dat. wrigh some mo iss all good gurl.

marlboroman52483@yahoo.com
love kevin aka dunphy

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