Teen Poetry #5 |
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Hopeless, screwed up, always(eh? ni!) |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733![]() |
Craig, I wanted to appologize in person, but I can't wait that long. I'm a little on the less creative side, so I had to use a little help from our buddy(lol) ![]() ![]() I've got it all For you I would crawl, away from the world And I'd come back again. You feel in within The fear's back again- Leaving your heart on the line to dry I'm a hopeless screwed up girl It's a shame I cry so darn much You know I can't always believe All the compliments you give There's a moment for us this time, When I promise to stay by your side Keep your faith in us You know that I, you know I will stay by your side. I smile today But it won't take away Won't change the pain we've both caused before Stupid and wrong- Couldn't I have known You'd get hurt when I hurt myself I'm your hopeless screwed up girl It's a shame I cry so darn much You know I can't always believe All the compliments you give There's a moment here this time, When I promise to stay by your side Keep your faith in us You know that I, You know I'll love your for all time Forgive my difficulty, forgive my stubbornness, forgive my paranoia, forgive my need to bye reassured, forgive my moodiness, forgive my irritability, forgive me for all the wrongs I've done. The world should know I love you. Gracias. [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (03-14-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
good poem but i had to edit some of the words you had in it remeber this is a family site tks for the read very well written i am me don't tell me different!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Isabel- Wonderful, heartfelt apology. Hugs, ~Vicky |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Aww, lovely. ![]() Very nicely done. ![]() Loved the sudden rush of words at the end, in particular. ~ Titus "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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