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LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-03-13 06:40 PM

I've worked all my life just to overcome
The obstacles on this course that I run
But when looking back on all the tears I've cried
I finally see the many attempts failed when tried
And I see that I never truely had an exsistance
Just lived a life of fear and resistance
And when looking back at all I want to forget
I find that I have only pain, and only regret
Obstacles become dreams of what I hoped to be
And when I was younger I was too blind to see
Now I have very little to live for except you
But caught up in your problems, you're blinded too
I need you to live, I need you to be here
I need you to promise me that you wont live in fear
Because without you my life is just {edit}
And living without you honestly isn't worth it
Think about me when you think you have no one else
Think before you do these things to youself
I care about you, with my heart, mind, and soul
And without you by my side, I'll never be whole

~Lisa
p.s. this started about something and slowly got off topic until I was talking about someone else...I guess the best kind of poetry is something you write without realizing it...

[This message has been edited by LCBS (03-13-2002 06:42 PM).]

Lennon2002
Junior Member

since 2002-01-10

Posts 31
The wV

1 posted 2002-03-13 10:52 PM

"Now I have very little to live for except you
But caught up in your problems, you're blinded too" ---- I Loved this part..... I Loved the whole Poem...... I LOVE this STYLE! wow...... *Ctrl+P*

I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon

Android 18
Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 61
Austrailia (My DreamLand)

2 posted 2002-03-13 11:19 PM

I have to agree with Lennon. It's an awsome poem!!! You're right, it starts out as one thing then transformed into something else. It's a great poem, it's going into my personal library!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-14 08:07 AM

Omg great great GREAT poem!!!!!!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

4 posted 2002-03-14 11:01 PM

Sorry guys I have to do this, sometimes I jsut need to know people can relate to me soooooo...

BUMP
Sorry...

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