Teen Poetry #5 |
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Knight... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
I don't know if this makes sense..my brain and my heart are sending mixed signals.. You are everyone's Shoulder to cry on Why should I be any different? But I've come To find myself Wanting to see you in a different light Perhaps you are a Knight Sent to brighten The darkest of my days And take away The enshrouding pain With your delicate words Your name constantly falls upon my lips Yet I don't want you To see me like this In constant pain Waiting... Anticipating The day when you too Will be calling out my name... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Kris.... Why am I always the first to respond...(I dont think I have very much of a life..) Anyway, this poem was very good, and I liked the emotions expressed in it...still waiting on my emails! ![]() ~Lisa |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Thanks Lisa and I finally emailed you!! ![]() |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
hmm this reminds me of someone.. But i am not going to go into detail. Good job, a very well written poem. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I liked this cuz it was pretty original, yet it still made perfect sense to me...I know someone like the person u describe here...excellent job, thanks for sharing it. ![]() The day you were born, you were born free |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You always give us amazing work!!! And this one is just as great as the rest of them!!! Keep on sharing!!! ![]() ~It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe |
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Dark Avenger New Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 3Darkness |
I really enjoyed reading this. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
As always kristin amazing job!!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow, Kristen, I love it.... ![]() ~ Titus Will I ever forget what happened today? |
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Aerhercnian Junior Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 10Listening |
I really enjoyed the read ![]() And there stood Aechercnian silent and calm listening to the trees. |
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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 36im a louisiana cajun princess! lol |
hey, i liked this, very well written. ![]() |
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