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Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

0 posted 2001-07-11 12:03 PM

I Love You

It's 3 words long
Which you say
"I Love You"
I'll say it to you,
But will you say it back?

This Kiss

The last kiss was long and great
The first was unexpected
But what mattered was,
You kissed me back
With just as much passion

Love

It's only 4 letters long
But it takes you heart and soul
And gives it to the one you love
When that loves gone,
Your heart is broken
And you're a lonely soul.

They are not the best but there were simple like I am and the fitted my mood.

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-07-11 12:07 PM

all three are really good... each describing its title well. good job. keep writing.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-07-11 12:30 PM

They were all so short, but still good. My fav was the last one. Great job!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

3 posted 2001-07-11 01:55 PM

All three of them were great, short, simple and entertaining.

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-11 06:43 PM

Nicely done here x3
I really liked them

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-07-12 01:42 AM

well done on expressing each subject...in such short verses..you brought it out VERY nicely...i enjoyed all three a lot

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-12 04:06 AM

All 3 were short, sweet, and to the point.
Great job, Sarah.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-07-25 10:26 AM

All short poems are really good. Makes a reader think. Thanks for sharing.

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