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Can I be done now mommy?
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Can I be done now mommy? |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
=( :( :( R.I.P In Loving Memory of Eddie Fink Born Nov.12,96 Died Mar.6,2002 I Wrote this poem for him... 3/10/2002 Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? When will this pain end? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Can the tears fall now? Will we get to go home Now? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Can the memories in my Head flow? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Can I go dance with the angels? Can I hug you one last time Mommy? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Will I feel any pain? Will god be there waiting for me At the golden gate? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be down now mommy? Will u be ok mommy? Don’t cry mommy Don’t forget me mommy I’m always in your heart Remember me Mommy. Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? =( :( :( ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
It is always horrible when a childs life is loss, and it always shows us harsh reality. Defenseless children should never lose their lifes, and I am sorry that you ever had to go through it Great Write..email me if you want to ~lisa |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
as a mom, this made my heart ache.....well done....you touched  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Losing a child must absolutely be unbareable pain. Watching a family friend lose their child whom was my friend as well was excrusiating pain, more than i could handle..but i cant even imagine what it would be like to lose a child of my own one day....very sad piece...you spoke of the loss well...::hugs:: iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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