Teen Poetry #5 |
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A single Rose for Allison |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
My best friend Allison's mother died in October. On Christmas Eve, the 4 month anniversary of her death, my two friends and I went to her grave. We each had one long stemmed red rose, my friends crossed theres over eachother on top of the gravestone, and went into the car. I dropped to my knees and laid a single rose into the snow over the frozen grass, writing only these two words "For Allison..." A single rose for Allison As written in the snow A single rose for Allison Just want to let you know A single rose for Allison We are always here for you A single rose for Allison We're gonna help you through A single rose for Allison You are just so strong A single rose for Allison For holding up for long A single rose for Allison Its ok to let go to tears A single rose for Allison You jsut lived my biggest fear A single rose for Allison Just let someone embrace you A single rose for Allison Other people are hurting too A single rose for Allison Just wanted to let you know A single rose for Allison As written in the snow |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
thats good..I like it a lot..I lost alot of my family members..I never know how to greve of there loss..never go see there grave..it just hurts too much "Water Over Matter" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I cant seem to go visit people either. Makes everything worse for me. I cant even go to wakes or funerals. This was a very sweet poem Im sure Allison would like it very much! ~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know I really felt this poem. In all it's simplicity it is written very well. Great job...it's terrible to lose someone.. my friend's mother died a bit ago, and it takes a while to heal...if you ever really can. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow. I remember at a Memorial Mass (9/22/00) for my friend Jesica who died, they passed out orange carnations to the entire eighth grade class in memory of her. I still have mine. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was really beautiful. Its important for allison to know that your always there for her. You are an amazing friend ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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