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Teen Poetry #5

Vacant Heart

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2002-03-05 12:18 PM

twisted words
broken heart
lying tears
crying soul

lost within
feelings numb
wet descends
jagged soul

never knowing
words fade
untrue love
tearing soul

ripped apart
empty shell
nothing there
dying soul

My...
vacant heart

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (03-05-2002 12:19 AM).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2002-03-05 01:10 AM

What a unique poem!!! I really like the way that you formatted it!!! Cant wait to read more!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

2 posted 2002-03-05 12:27 PM

WOW! This was awesome. I totally love this, great job, i could relate.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-03-05 03:45 PM

wow...I really liked this....It is unique and beautiful, thanks for sharing!

~LCBS

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-03-05 05:15 PM

Strong piece and full of emotion...nicely done!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

5 posted 2002-03-05 10:19 PM

The setup of this is awesome!
Great work.
I like it very much!!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Lennon2002
Junior Member

since 2002-01-10

Posts 31
The wV

6 posted 2002-03-05 10:36 PM

Rocknroll Tifferoke *bump*

~Time you enjoy wasting was not wasted.~ John Lennon
~I don't believe in death because I'm ready for it- John Lennon

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