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Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2002-02-26 08:26 AM

A broken heart,
is all I have left,
of the memories,
we once shared.
No more smiles.
No more happy times.
Just one more good~bye,
that I didnt want,
you to hear.
Just one to many tears,
that I didnt,
want to have to shed.
And to much pain,
that I didnt,
want to feel.

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~
[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-26-2002 08:27 AM).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-26 11:30 AM

Aww hun this was so sad...you speak of heartbreak so well and you describe your emotions wonderfully..nicely done

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-02-26 11:31 AM

Sorrryyyy

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (02-26-2002 11:32 AM).]

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-02-26 05:12 PM

For what shugah?

Erin, I enjoyed reading something by you! It's been a while. A very sad tearjerker here. I think I know what you're talking about... if you want to talk, you know where I am.

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2002-02-27 07:09 AM

Shugar~To bad its not just whats in my mind...

Its what in my heart too...Wish it wasnt though!!!

Titus~YOu should know what I am talking about...I did tell you alot!!! If not then I dont know what to tell ya!!!

Have you read any of my poetry besides this one??? Cause it was all mainly posted in Teen 3...Hmmm anyways I never got that email you told me about...Ill talk to you later though!!!

Thanks both of yous for taking the time out to read and reply to my poem!!! Really means alot to me!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-27-2002 07:10 AM).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2002-02-28 05:08 AM

this is so sad...breakups suck

...short and simple, but you wrote your thoughts well

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2002-03-03 05:32 PM

I liked the way you penned your thoughts very much, thank you for sharing this with us.

If you see this message I have just replied to your poem. I have poems as well *hint*

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

7 posted 2002-03-04 12:26 PM

Sad but very well written I like it.
Lauren

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

8 posted 2002-03-04 05:27 PM

I forgot that I posted this one! Thanks for readng it!!!

Marshalzu~I love that quote!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

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