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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2002-03-02 10:42 AM



Remembering

As I leave,
this town behind,
I bring along,
the memories,
of you,
and I.

Memories,
of laughter,
sadness,
and fear.

Memories,
of when you said,
I love you.

I'll always remember,
how you would always,
manage to put,
a smile upon my face,
even in the worst of times.

But the thing,
I'll remember the most,
is your smile.

A smile that could,
turn any old rainy day,
into a sunny day.

I love you,
and always will.

For you are,
in my heart,
and in my heart,
is where you shall stay,
for all entirety.

© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-02 10:56 AM


this is very sweet, I hope you give it to the person you wrote it for
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2 posted 2002-03-02 11:31 AM


This is indeed very sweet!
Neha

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3 posted 2002-03-02 03:53 PM


::wipping away tears::
I love you soo very very much!!  We will be together even with the distance issue.  I will find ways to get down to be with you and I'll find ways for you to get up here to be with me.  We will be 1 forever and you won't have to think of me more than you will see me cuz I'll be with you always.
I love you soo much, and I miss you very very much already.

Love you Always~
~Dan

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4 posted 2002-03-02 07:08 PM


Awww...this is cute!

Hmmm...although I find the flow of it kinda strange---it's probably just because I'm really picky today! Lol

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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5 posted 2002-03-03 10:43 PM


Smiles are great Take the memories with you wherever you go! Great poem

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

TopGunLauren
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6 posted 2002-03-04 12:18 PM


Very sweet poem and you should take those memories wherever life brings you. Keep up the awsome work.
   Lauren

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7 posted 2002-03-04 05:34 PM


Sweet poem!!! I hate thinking of memories like that cause they always upset me!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

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