Teen Poetry #5 |
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Run away with me tonight |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Run away with me tonight Rescue me before its to late carry me off on horseback battle the clock, battle my fate Run away to a far off place to castles, to fairytales be my Knight in shining armor defeat the dragon, hero prevails Carry me off to magical forests Protect me from the evil beasts call around your loyal subjects Be ready for welcome home feasts Bask with me in sunfilled spaces Pick flowers in the colorful pastures swim with me beneath waterfalls run with me, avoiding capture Run away with me tonight Save me from nomality take me to my Camelot Be my escape from reality *I have to credit Kristen with the Camelot idea, she set my mind in motion a couple weeks ago, and so bgan my daydreams... Thanks Kris Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... [This message has been edited by LCBS (02-24-2002 01:24 PM).] |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Knights and white stallions...what beautiful images..wouldnt it just be great if we could escape reality with a prince or something?? mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I really enjoyed this poem, especially the last line about escaping reality...when we're little we imagine these fairytale lives and then as we get older we stop believing in that because it just sounds silly....it'd be nice if more people didn't outgrow that part of childhood. Awesome job ![]() The day you were born, you were born free |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
boy, wouldn't that be nice...*drifts off into daydream* |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
does sound so romantic doesnt it? it would have been a nice valentines! ![]() Zombie |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I so loved this!! and your welcome..err *coughs* I hope I didn't freak you out, by emailing you..*runs off* take care okay and I'm so printing this out!! lovely just amazingly wonderful!! Kris |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
=) awesome poem once again...=) i love horses and knights and dragons and magic and oh i just simply loved this one =) thank you so much A life without loveā¦is no life at all. |
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