Teen Poetry #5 |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
ok this is a bit different than the last one i posted but its about someone else so here ya go. I don’t know what’s right, Or wrong anymore. I hate being away, From you all this time. It’s so DEPRESSING. It brings tears to my eyes, Oh how I miss you so. Everything’s so blurry, And everything seems fake. My whole world once surrounded YOU. I’d be lost without our love, I’m so glad we found each other. Oceans may be between us, But that we can conquer. We can, as long as we’re TOGETHER. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Thats weird I should be reading this when "Blurry" is on..very freaky..but that's my life..but I do hope all works out for you.. Kristen |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
good poem...for real..this really explains wut is goin on for ya now and dont take wut ya have for granted! love ya ~Jess ![]() ~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
you expressed yourself very well. Good job. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
lucky you..glad you have a nice guy.. "Water Over Matter" |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
This is a sweet poem, hope you let the person read it. Hope things work out with your relationship ![]() The day you were born, you were born free |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Love has no boundaries....its wonderful to see you so in love ![]() mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks 4 the replies everybody ![]() ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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