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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-02-21 06:21 PM



ok this is a bit different than the last one i posted but its about someone else so here ya go.

I don’t know what’s right,
Or wrong anymore.
I hate being away,
From you all this time.
It’s so DEPRESSING.
It brings tears to my eyes,
Oh how I miss you so.
Everything’s so blurry,
And everything seems fake.
My whole world once surrounded YOU.
I’d be lost without our love,
I’m so glad we found each other.
Oceans may be between us,
But that we can conquer.
We can, as long as we’re TOGETHER.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA
1 posted 2002-02-21 06:53 PM


Thats weird I should be reading this when "Blurry" is on..very freaky..but that's my life..but I do hope all works out for you..

Kristen

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2002-02-21 07:35 PM


good poem...for real..this really explains wut is goin on for ya now and dont take wut ya have for granted! love ya ~Jess

~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
3 posted 2002-02-22 02:35 PM


you expressed yourself very well.
Good job.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida
4 posted 2002-02-22 08:33 PM


lucky you..glad you have a nice guy..

"Water Over Matter"

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
5 posted 2002-02-23 12:32 PM


This is a sweet poem, hope you let the person read it. Hope things work out with your relationship

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
6 posted 2002-02-23 11:56 AM


Love has no boundaries....its wonderful to see you so in love I too hope you let the person read this!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
7 posted 2002-02-23 03:04 PM


thanks 4 the replies everybody

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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