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Teen Poetry #5

The self

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-02-20 02:30 AM

SITTING
with myself
THINKING
about myself
REMEMBERING
by myself
LYING
to myself

FIGHTING
with myself
LAUGHING
about myself
REMEMBERING
by myself
CRYING
to myself

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

Wood_Stock
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 58
The little yellow

1 posted 2002-02-20 05:00 AM

Sweet.

I love these simple "poems", I use the quotations because they are more like thoughts... but then, what's a poem?

Everything is open to interpretation hey?!

I really liked this one too, and I'm surprised I have the honor of wrting the first reply! heh heh.

Anyway, as I have nothing constructive to say, I'll shut up now!

keep up the good work.

Wood_Stock

if you flap hard enough, who's to say you won't fly?

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

2 posted 2002-02-20 02:39 PM

i wrote this poem when i had run away from home so it's kinda of my litle glimpse of the real would out of my parents controll. i was depressed when i wrote this

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-02-20 06:58 PM

you definately express your inner pain very well through your words. This piece is strong and well written.

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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