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Teen Poetry #5

Overcoming life

Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-07-10 02:02 PM

Overcoming life
Everyday you take a step
Everyday you have to move
And everyday you have a fear

I have a challenge every day
Overcoming my life
With pain joy and sorrow

Each challenge I take makes the day go by faster
Each challenge that I’m faced with makes me a stronger person
Each challenge is teaching me something

One day I’ll overcome my fears
One day I’ll over come my tears that I hide
One day I’ll overcome my life
Minna
July 10, 2001

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

1 posted 2001-07-10 03:05 PM

Great job. The idea of overcoming life seems kinda far fetched to me. I mean how can you overcome it if you are still living it? Well, it was still a great idea.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-07-10 11:08 PM

I like that... Overcoming life is an interesting way to put it. I liked this one, keep posting.

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-11 04:04 AM

Awesome job here Minna. I really liked this one. The last line really leaves you wanting more

I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-15 09:16 PM

This is very well written... lots of emotion is portrayed, as in all your poetry. Stay strong, sweetie... You'll get there

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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