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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
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0 posted 2002-02-17 11:36 PM



so lost in this twisted reality
a loss for words to try and express how i feel
knowing how i see things is a limited view
of what is around in this world of ours
wanting not to be so clouded
and oblivious to the world around me
seeing others lost in this mist
so blind as to whats going on in the world
knowing i can't b much better
knowing there is alwayz room for improvment
wanting not to throw my judgment upon others
knowing how much i hate it when
others don't really even give me a chance
not wanting to be like that
knowing i'm not perfect
no one is no one ever will be
trying to take life one day at a time

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

© Copyright 2002 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
gracianna
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since 2002-02-17
Posts 165
A 14 year hell
1 posted 2002-02-17 11:38 PM


Well, what can I say? It sounds like the life of a teenager. Very well expressed.

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
2 posted 2002-02-18 12:59 PM


Heh, that was kinda funny... how we're all confused all the time. But a good write anyway.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2002-02-18 01:17 AM


I can completely relate to this Dazed and confused....those 2 words represnt my life...lol..great poem

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
4 posted 2002-02-27 02:27 PM


thats all we can do isnt it? 'take one day at a time' *hug* yea i agree with the above comment, life of a teenager.. woo fun eh? *grin*
loved the title on this always interested in the thoughts of scarlet even if they are mumbo jumbo. nice write hun. keep em coming.
..tiff..

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2002-02-28 05:02 AM


like everyone said...good poem! you expressed yourself well, and i enjoyed the read

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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