Teen Poetry #5 |
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mumbo jumbo thoughts of scarlet |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
so lost in this twisted reality a loss for words to try and express how i feel knowing how i see things is a limited view of what is around in this world of ours wanting not to be so clouded and oblivious to the world around me seeing others lost in this mist so blind as to whats going on in the world knowing i can't b much better knowing there is alwayz room for improvment wanting not to throw my judgment upon others knowing how much i hate it when others don't really even give me a chance not wanting to be like that knowing i'm not perfect no one is no one ever will be trying to take life one day at a time as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
Well, what can I say? It sounds like the life of a teenager. Very well expressed. I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Heh, that was kinda funny... how we're all confused all the time. But a good write anyway. ![]() "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I can completely relate to this ![]() mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
thats all we can do isnt it? 'take one day at a time' *hug* yea i agree with the above comment, life of a teenager.. woo fun eh? *grin* loved the title on this ![]() ..tiff.. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
like everyone said...good poem! you expressed yourself well, and i enjoyed the read ![]() Zombie |
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