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Remembering You
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Remembering You |
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Kristen1305 New Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 1 |
.::Remembering You::. Your clueless ways, they are so kind, If you look past the obstacles our love you’ll find. Over the years I’ve laughed and wept, Remembering the memories I’ve hoped you’ve kept. When you look at me with your eyes so blue, There’s no doubt in my mind that our love could be true. There isn’t a time when I see you that my heart doesn’t melt, From the feelings inside that I have always felt. When’s the last time you’ve heard my heart will go on? Do you remember, in 4th grade we couple skated to that song? I don’t understand why you do not feel the same for me, Should I just leave you alone and let you be free? Someday I’ll look back-when I think it’s the end, And realize you were more than just my everlasting crush, You were my unforgettable friend. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This is a really great poem I love the flow of this poem it is constant throughout so it makes for easy reading! Welcome to PIP Keep on posting! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Great first POST!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS KRISTEN!!!! Enjoy your stay, and make sure you read others work and reply to thers poems, and they will do the same for you. GOod luck! ~~Jeff~~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
W*E*L*C*O*M*E T*O P*A*S*S*I*O*N*S!!!! Its great to have you join us. I really enjoyed your first post. U put a lot of feeling into it. Nicely done  I cant wait to read more from you!!! P.S.- Check ur e-mail for a special greeting! mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
Kristen this is a really great first post, brilliant poem keep it up, i can really relate to you on this poem as i am going through what i think u are at the moment. the key is to be strong and remember the good times. if u need to talk e-mail me. Clare keep posting! |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
Kristen this is a really great first post, brilliant poem keep it up, i can really relate to you on this poem as i am going through what i think u are at the moment. the key is to be strong and remember the good times. if u need to talk e-mail me. Clare keep posting! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
welcome 2 piptalk and i hope u like ur stay. this wuz a great first post, i liked it! keep it up.  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Someday I’ll look back-when I think it’s the end, And realize you were more than just my everlasting crush, You were my unforgettable friend." this brought a tear to my eye....I have a friend like this....that I miss very much, and will always love.... Welcome! fantastic emotional first post! |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Great poem... But if you do the math, you were skating to My Heart Will Go On in 4th grade, so you only in your young teens. Heartbreak happens at that age, it just happened to me, and it will happen again. You have to be strong because your young, and you need to realize that it was probably not meant to be. ~LCBS Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Welcome to Passions!!! This was a really great first post. I really liked the part about how the other person was not just your "everlasting crush", but he was also a really great friend. After all the best relationships are always those that start out as friendships. If you need to talk email is AWood0813@charter.net and AIM is AWBlues13. Hope to read more soon. ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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-Queth- Junior Member
since 2002-02-10
Posts 35Canada |
First of all, welcome to PIP! -smile- This being your first post, I really thought it was emotionally touching. The flow was great here, and the entire poem gave a nice wispy effect, like a past dream. I hope to see more from you! Q.u.e.t.h. Everything in between... |
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becky New Member
since 2002-02-16
Posts 1 |
omg. That is me. Im the girl with the blue eyes to my friend who I skated with for so long. we have always been friends, but now I see it. the compliments, the valentine... I am so dense. But a great poem! |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
ooooh, I Love this style....rock on!  Time you enjoy wasting, was not wasted- John Lennon |
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mateusz New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 7 |
this is a very good poem. i cant wait to read more of your work! |
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