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chas
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

0 posted 2002-02-14 11:54 PM

Have you ever wondered, what life is all about?
The secrets that it keeps within, that is keeping you locked out,
and every moment that you're living, it gives you doubts and more regrets,
and keeps you wishing for the best, and asking "is it over yet,"
at night you go and pray to god, with hopes that he could hear,
the whispers that you shout to him, soaked within your tears,
you close your eyes and go to sleep, to dream a world of your own,
but disappointed when you awake, to find you still within your home,
nothing in your life it seems, is going how you want it to,
and it pains me even more, knowing there is nothing I can do,
I only saw you for an instant, and almost felt i knew you,
i know now of your existence, i cannot let you pass on through,
so i shall wait until the day, when life would point you toward me,
until then i will prepare, and try to show you how great life can really be.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-15 03:06 PM

Great post, I hope you find the person you are talking about soon...

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

2 posted 2002-02-15 11:43 PM

I really liked this poem! Great writing . . .

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

3 posted 2002-02-15 11:44 PM

Chas my friend!!!!!!
WHere have you been!!

AWESOME poem kid, I really loved it!!

Dude, IM me sometime, huh?

~~Jeff~~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-17 12:25 PM

This was SUCH an awesome poem!!! You should really post more often

I can totally relate to this...it had my name written all over it!! Hope to see you around more!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

5 posted 2002-02-18 02:31 PM

i wish i was as popular as jbaker515, maybe i would get more reply.. but oh well, the less amount of people who read my poem, the more meaning it has to those who have read it. hahahahahahah

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2002-02-18 09:39 PM

BUMP lol chas

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

7 posted 2002-02-19 01:32 AM

great word choice, definetly..

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

8 posted 2002-02-19 03:11 PM

Totally cool. I liked it alot. I don't have much else to say but I truly liked this one.
JON

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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