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LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-02-14 04:30 PM

I need to print a retraction from "Big Brother," it was a heat of the moment thing after a fight, and I shouldn't have ever posted it....

For Kev

I wish what you said was true
But sadly your mistaken
How could I ever upstage you?
Your poetry can't be shaken
You rhyme with such perfection
That you leave listeners in awe
Your meter, and your word selection
makes verse composed without flaw
But I have to write a retraction
for my "big brother" post
I may have had an overreaction
because I Love you the most
And sometimes I do make mistakes
Yes I know its hard to believe
but Kev, deep down inside it aches
When I see you hurt by me
So with every capitol letter
I began to get upset
And it definitly wasn't for the better
when I did something I would regret
Kev you have always been
a great big brother to me
And much to my own chagrin
It took me too long to see

~Lisa

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

[This message has been edited by LCBS (02-14-2002 09:56 PM).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2002-02-14 10:15 PM

"And sometimes I do make mistakes
Yes I know its hard to believe
but Kev, deep down inside it aches
When I see you hurt by me"
oh liza those words spoke to me the most. i like this one a lot. a sincere apology is always one that comes from the heart. i hope things get better for you guys

thanks for sharing this retraction with us

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-02-15 03:52 PM

Kevin,
I love you, and your the greatest big brother I could ever wish for!!!!!
I hope you liked this, its not exactly great, but it truthful

~Lisa

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-02-15 09:19 PM

Im trying to keep this at the top until mr brother reads this

Sorry

~Lisa

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-17 12:40 PM

This was a beautiful and sweet retracting for your bro lisa..

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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