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Muffy
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0 posted 2002-02-13 07:42 PM



My friends got me into this game,
it's really not the same.

As you run out to play,
players think"put your problems aside for another day."

There is a lot of fast motion,
the audience begins to start a commotion,
As one of the teams take the lead,
a few more points, the team will need.

All the different plays they make,
coach wonders which shot will they take.

The adrenaline begins to rush,
as the crowd comes out of the silenced hush.

The ball hits the floor,
sitting on the bench is finally no more.
When you take this orang sphere,
all your thoughts disappear.

As the game comes to an end,
a new game you wish would begin.

But none the less the game is done,
Man! That was FUN!

© Copyright 2002 Muffy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-13 07:46 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

This was a great first post!  Basketball is a great sport!  Hope to see more from you!

Just make sure that you reply to other peoples poems, and they will reply to yours if you do so.  Enjoy your stay here, there is much to see and do!

~~Jeff~~

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2 posted 2002-02-13 10:20 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Nice job on your first post! I look forward to reading more from you welcome again!!

P.S.- Check ur e-mail for a special greeting!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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3 posted 2002-02-14 10:11 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

As your Senior Moderator, I'd like to welcome you in behalf of everyone
ou should find this place to be really friendly
hope you enjoy your stay
happy posting and reading too

Your first post was such a thrill to read
I'm glad you enjoy the game
keep em coming and thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Voiceless
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4 posted 2002-02-14 08:19 PM


You got your basketball
and I got my soccer!

Welcome to PIP,
always good to see
some new people posting!
Very well done!
Keep up the good work!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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