Teen Poetry #5 |
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My Angel In The Dark |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Drest in black tall & sexy My angel in the dark has come to Protect me, sitting up i rach for him My hand he takes gives it a kiss that Sets me on fire i smile at him tell him He my only soulmate. He smiles back with that warm Beautiful smile tells me that i'm his dove Swimming in his heart that keeps him Alive,kissing his fingers like a petel of a Rose i say i love u angel in the dark, Taking me in his arms i melt in To his skin moving to his Lips that send shivers down my spine I look in his green sparkling eyes They tell me he wants me needs me in His world i answer to him i'm forever Your dove girl. Lighting a candel to reflect off our bodies Unbiting his shirt i feel his heart beat i Plant a kiss right on his heart he shivers A little he takes his thum and lifts up My chin,looking at him this man i Might marry i'm happy he's here to share This special night. His cold finger tips brush over my neck I giggle and tell him it tickels he says Good that was my plan as i lay down to Sleep i tell him dont leave he tells me I wont my love dove i'm staying By u for eternity. ©Ang ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Good write... Is that about a bf you have/had? My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
besides some miss spellings, and some missed punctuation, this is a very lovely poem. You have narrated your happiness so well. thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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sillywilly Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 33oklahoma |
I really, really, really like it. Good job! |
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