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Untitled "Song"
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Untitled "Song" |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I don't know what to call it, so i thought maybe you guys could help....hope ya'll enjoy it Best Wishes, Brian. "Untitled" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved In a world of darkness You are my light And when you leave you say Keep me in mind I have always lived my Life by your hand 'Cause I know you make me A better man I THOUGHT FINDING TRUE LOVE WAS IMPOSSIBLE BUT YOU PROVED ME ALL WRONG TONIGHT BEAUTIFUL I NEVER THOUGHT THAT MAN COULD CRY UNTILL YOU BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYE DARLING YOU YOU'RE THE REASON WHY Pretty and beautiful That's what you are And you will always be Inside my heart I don't know what I'd do Without you here 'Cause I feel so helpless When you're not near I THOUGHT FINDING TRUE LOVE WAS IMPOSSIBLE BUT YOU PROVED ME ALL WRONG TONIGHT BEAUTIFUL I NEVER THOUGHT THAT MAN COULD CRY UNTILL YOU BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYE DARLING YOU YOU'RE THE REASON WHY It's like living in a dream tonight But trust me when I say that... I THOUGHT FINDING TRUE LOVE WAS IMPOSSIBLE BUT YOU PROVED ME ALL WRONG TONIGHT BEAUTIFUL I NEVER THOUGHT THAT MAN COULD CRY UNTILL YOU BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYE DARLING YOU YOU'RE THE REASON WHY |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very, very nice, I found myself finding a tune to go with it, now how about "You're The Reason Why" The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hallucination- This is beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it.  I have to agree with Mysteria...I was also thinking of 'The Reason Why' or 'You're The Reason Why' for a title suggestion. Very nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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