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0 posted 2001-07-10 06:39 AM


I've reached the end,
you have what i want!
i know i can never have him!
I try not to let this affect our friendship.
so far it hasn't.
I'm afraid it will.
we are such good friends.
this love i have for him will not end.

robin

  

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-10 08:52 AM


this one is bout me and my friend sarah. just so SOMEONE *cough* *cough* doesn't get the wrong idea.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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2 posted 2001-07-10 10:27 AM


Ah...  What a crappy situation!!  I know how that feels, though...  I thought the poem was very good.  You did a good job of expressing your feelings on a bad sitation.  

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3 posted 2001-07-10 12:02 PM


This was nice poem, but defintely not a nice situation.  I hope everything turns out OK.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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4 posted 2001-07-10 04:44 PM


Jealousy sucks a lot. I hope things get well for you  
Good job on the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-07-12 07:25 PM


yea this poem is not my best but i guess it'll do.

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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6 posted 2001-07-20 06:46 PM


Straight to the point.  I love these kinds of poems cause I don't have to have a brain cramp before I get to understand them.  keep it up

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7 posted 2001-07-27 06:34 AM


right on robin!!!!....i enjoyed reading it

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Send a smile over to you"
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8 posted 2001-07-27 03:02 PM


this was good not your best but it was simple and to the poent.

REgina

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9 posted 2001-07-27 03:17 PM


Jealousy does suck!!
Great poem, short and sweet.

~Jeff~

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10 posted 2001-07-28 05:36 PM


I know a good bit about jealousy.. But anyway, great poem!!!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

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11 posted 2001-08-03 12:07 PM


Aww.. tough situation.. I'm sorry that you're stuck in the middle here.  Very hard.. I hope things work out for the best.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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12 posted 2001-08-03 02:02 AM


omg jeff actually read one of my poems i'm shocked! lol glad yall liked this one.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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