Teen Poetry #5 |
Jealousy |
punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
I've reached the end, you have what i want! i know i can never have him! I try not to let this affect our friendship. so far it hasn't. I'm afraid it will. we are such good friends. this love i have for him will not end. robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
this one is bout me and my friend sarah. just so SOMEONE *cough* *cough* doesn't get the wrong idea. robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Ah... What a crappy situation!! I know how that feels, though... I thought the poem was very good. You did a good job of expressing your feelings on a bad sitation. - Cody - |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was nice poem, but defintely not a nice situation. I hope everything turns out OK. *Amanda* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Jealousy sucks a lot. I hope things get well for you Good job on the poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
yea this poem is not my best but i guess it'll do. i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Straight to the point. I love these kinds of poems cause I don't have to have a brain cramp before I get to understand them. keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
right on robin!!!!....i enjoyed reading it "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was good not your best but it was simple and to the poent. REgina |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Jealousy does suck!! Great poem, short and sweet. ~Jeff~ |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
I know a good bit about jealousy.. But anyway, great poem!!! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. tough situation.. I'm sorry that you're stuck in the middle here. Very hard.. I hope things work out for the best. Thanks for sharing this with us. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
omg jeff actually read one of my poems i'm shocked! lol glad yall liked this one. robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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