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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-07-10 05:49 AM

The wind was heavier than ever,
it spoke in a formidable tone
speaking of its journey
   in its undirectional moan.

^*~*^

It took my tacit voice
and gave it a history of speech
but it had been so long since I'd spoken
   that some help was out of reach.

^*~*^

It tried to consolidate my mind,
with its windy, whispy wave
but as I began to flinch
   we both knew I was far from brave.

^*~*^

My confidence was tardy,
slow, disjointed hope
trapping me with its burden
   and keeping me locked in rope.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2001-07-10 06:53 AM

very good i liked this one keep em comin girl!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-07-10 10:29 AM

Very good. Enjoyed the read.

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-07-10 12:01 PM

I loved the last stanza. This was a great poem. Thanks for the great read!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2001-07-10 12:13 PM

Very well written piece, hope to see more from you soon!

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

5 posted 2001-07-10 12:40 PM

this is really good

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-10 05:21 PM

I enjoyed this Kim.
Wonderful job.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-10 07:55 PM

I liked this one Kim. Well done here......impressive work.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-07-10 09:20 PM

nicely done...i really liked the expression in this one

...great poem.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-10-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-07-23 09:32 AM

Oooo kim, this is really good
I believe this is one of your best poems
*applauds*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

10 posted 2001-07-23 12:51 PM

doesn't this happen to us all sometimes?? Its nice to know that some peole express it more than others. Great job. /Nick/

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