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corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-02-09 10:35 PM

they say there is the one for you
some were out in the world
how do you know when its the one
cause there are so many
and not enough time
but i want to belive
belive i found her
that light burning in her eyes

but she doesnt even know
i love her
and how i want to tell her
and yet i have
in more ways than one
some day she will know
the fealings i have for her

just i dont want to wait
and waste any more time
time that is ours
that we should have together
trying to start this love between us

but how do u know if shes the one.

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

1 posted 2002-02-10 01:20 PM

Little man, this was great.

Always from the heart, and that's what makes poetry beautiful.

Keep it up.

~~Jeff~~

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2002-02-10 02:03 PM

Corey,

This is a very beautifull written poem from the heart. I wish I could tell you how to know if she really is the one.

Dawn

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

3 posted 2002-02-10 02:18 PM

Corey I know excatly what you are going through right now. I did it my self for 2 years. When ever I had gotten up the nerve to ask her, she would be going with another guy. She did that for 2 years. She didn't know how much I loved her. Then I finialy stopped being chicken and asked her out. We have been going very strong for almost 4 months now. I can't tell you how you can know if she's the one for life, but to try it out. Ask her and tell her how you feel and if everything works for a long time and you both have the same feeling toward each other then I would say that you've got a winner. But you won't know if you don't try.
Good luck with your girl there Corey!
Good write!
~Dan

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

4 posted 2002-02-23 01:27 AM

well see i ask her and i just get shut down but i dont let it get me down cause i just say its somthng to work for

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