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Tamma
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0 posted 2002-02-08 09:03 PM


I know its early, but i dont like to procrastinate...

How Do I find the words,                    
To explain how I feel?                    
                    It hasn’t been long,
                    But you’re in my heart.
No one in my life,                            
Can compare to you.                    
                    You hold my heart,
                    In the palm of your hand.
You are in my dreams,                    
My hopes, my desires.                    
                    I love you with all I am,
                    With my heart and soul.

David ~ I love you!                    

                    Happy Valentine’s Day

Feb 2002




If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.


[This message has been edited by Tamma (02-08-2002 09:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-08 11:41 PM


this is wonderfully sweet!!
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2 posted 2002-02-09 12:44 PM


Awww very sweet!! Never to early to express your love

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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3 posted 2002-02-09 05:25 AM


ooooooh i like this one from you tamma....your work has matured. thanks for sharing this

life's not about who wins or loses, or about whos got the better car,or the most money. it's about living,and trying to make the best of what we have.

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4 posted 2002-02-09 05:46 AM


I think this is the sweetest poem...Sounds like you got yourself someone special...And its not too early valentines is like barely a week away...

I like your quote alot too!!! Its sweet!!!


If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-09-2002 05:48 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-02-10 02:45 PM


Very Very good poem. I like it alot!!
I can relate to it like I bet others can as well.  Love it.
Good write

~Dan

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6 posted 2002-02-10 03:35 PM


Tamma,

This is very beautiful. David is lucky to have such a poetess to write beautiful poetry for him.

                  Dawn

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7 posted 2002-02-10 09:06 PM


-Tamma-

Happy Valentines to you too, and thanks for sharing! David is one lucky guy! -smile-


Q.u.e.t.h.

Everything in between...

[This message has been edited by -Queth- (02-10-2002 09:07 PM).]

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