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Teen Poetry #5

I wanted to say I'm Sorry

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-02-08 08:24 PM

If I was to take all the pain from every time I hurt you,
I would surely be dead by now.
I wanted to say I’m sorry,
I hope its not too late.
I love you baby,
With everything I have.
I don’t have an excuse for the way I acted,
And I hope you can forgive me.
I so don’t wanna lose you,
You are my life.
I’m sorry for the way I acted,
Please forgive me?

A life without love…is no life at all.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-08 09:04 PM

I forgive you!, but I guess you dont care about me....Greazt Poem....

~LCBS

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-02-09 12:34 PM

An apology is always better late then never...

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2002-02-09 05:36 AM

LCBS~How are you gonna tell someone that you forgive them but then say they dont care about you??? If they made the effort to get you to forgive them then that person must really care about you...

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

4 posted 2002-02-09 08:54 PM

I love that!! I wish my b/f would send me that!!

"Water Over Matter"

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2002-02-09 11:28 PM

Tiger,

It is really obvious how much you love your girlfriend. I hope you two can work things out

Dawn

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

6 posted 2002-02-10 01:56 PM

This was a very good poem. I liked alot. Erin- Maybe she was just saying that as a type of joke and that possibly she isn't the one that he is talking about.
Again Great poem!
~Dan

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2002-02-11 05:06 PM

thx for the great replies guys =) i really appreciate it =)

=P just want to tell you that im a she...=P not a he =)

A life without love…is no life at all.

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