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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Here you go Adam I didn't want you to have your rabid teletubbies after me:P Expectations more than one can handle Consuming more than I can swallow Shrouded by an endless desmise As I'm constantly lost withindestiny's eyes Caught up in unnecessary drama Cradling back and forth crying for another To hold me like no other Just to be able to reach me As I'm stuck within these Faerie tale pages Of White Knights And living happily ever after... |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
*snickers* aww....damn. *throws a couple pieces of meat to his captive swarm of rabid teletubbies to quiet them* You know I like this one. -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
wow...and I thought my caged smurfs were bad...I'm a little confused about your inside joke....But I loved your poem!!!!! ~LCBS I was drowning in my own tears, until you threw me a life preserver |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Heh....Kris sent this poem to me in an e-mail, and I told her that if she didn't post it, I was gonna sic a swarm of rabid teletubbies on her. -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
hey I have a party coming up....do you rent out your rabid teletubbies...haha, thanks for clarifying.... ~LCBS |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
lol I wish I had some of those caged up so that I could let them lose in the school! Great poem and thanks for the clarifacation about the inside joke! ~Dan |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awesome piece!! I really enjoyed it  mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Hmm....I guess I could rent them out.....but I'll need one cookie per RT. Preferably white chocolate macadamia nut cookies. *drools* -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nicely done, once again. The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
now these cookies....how big do they have to be? Great job again Kristen, I loved the poem, now you have my expectations to live up to.... wow, that was lame if I do say so myself.... ~LCBS |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Thanks!!! and thanks to my sugar binge I've been on..to inspire these weird poems I've been writing..I think the more sugar I intake the more I allow my emotions flow on paper *gives each and everyone of you a sugar coated hug* hehehe |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Every poem I have read of yours is amazing...You have a way with the words...And im glad that you share them... Caught up in unnecessary drama Cradling back and forth crying for another To hold me like no other Just to be able to reach me Thats the part I like the best... If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with" [This message has been edited by ERIN (02-09-2002 05:41 AM).] |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ceinwyn, I really like this poem as well. Dawn |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very nice piece I love it. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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