Teen Poetry #5 |
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Demonic Shadow |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
Take a little trip, Down the road they skip. Strike them down one by one, Too blind to see the sun. See my face 100 times, Listen as your bell chimes. Sitting with the lonely street light, Still so far from human sight. Sacrifice those who haven't seen, The world beneath the green. This brings tears to my eyes, Plucking the souls full of lies. Feasting on their ignorant demise, Growing stronger the more I despise. Above all the others, Devouring sisters and brothers. They don't see me in all their confusion, For I'm nothing more.... Than a Demonic Illusion.... Fear not what you see, fear the Demonic Illusion in which you do not see |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Welcome to Passions.... Great first post... Hope to see more of you ~LCBS |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Sounds good...my sort of writing. Welcome to PIP. -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to Passions! This was a great first post. I hope you enjoy it here! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hey! Welcome, Awesome poem. I love it, morbid as that may seem.. It is great the flow and the picture you create are super! Can't wait to read more see ya around, Jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Good Poem! I like reading some of the darker poems like this. Very cool! Welcome to piptalk! I hope you like it here and I hope to be reading more of these poems soon! ~Dan |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! I enjoyed this a lot and i cant wait to read more from you!!! P.S.- check ur e-mail for a special greeting! mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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