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Devils Angel 666
Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA

0 posted 2002-02-06 09:26 PM


Why?
Why after 10 loving months
with you
do you have to move
away?
Why do you
have to change schools?

Why does life
treat us
like this?
Why does life
have to hurt us
as much as it will?

Is this some kind
of a test?
To see if we
are really ment to be?

I am so deathly afraid
of losing you.
I don't want you
to be away from me.
I'm afraid of this new Town,
in which you will be living.
I'm afraid it will change your thinking.
I'm afraid someone,
will try to take,
you away from me.

I was always afraid,
this would happen.
Then you tell me,
that we were ment,
to be together,
Forever.
And that nothing,
will take you,
away from me.
For this,
My love for you had tripled.
(if that is even possible
for my heart is already so full,
that it's about to burst)

I've never had anyone,
love me,
as much as you.
I love you, and always will.
Through sickness,
and in health.
For as long as I live,
in the world.
And my love for you will grow,
Everyday,
more and more,
till the day,
That we both Die.

© Copyright 2002 Dan - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-02-06 09:32 PM


OK so on your lst poem I said you were lucky you didnt lose your love, I was wrong.  You are experiencing the great pain and anguish that is brought with heartbreak.  Part of your soul has been torn out, and it will hurt I promise you.  But it will also get better, and no matter how cliche this sounds.....If it was really meant to be, then you will work it out.  

[This message has been edited by LCBS (02-06-2002 09:33 PM).]

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