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AliveAgain New Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 9In the clouds |
this poem is just a way to writing what i'm feeling about the friendship i just lost but realized we were only kidding ourselves cuz she didn't know me at all. Best Friend You hear that saying Best friends hear what you don't say Well where were you When I was screaming Yet my mouth was closed. You weren't there Which makes me wonder, ya know? Were you ever really there When I was talking Did you really hear me Really listen and understand I don't think so For if you were You would really know Exactly what I'm saying You would know me You would know my life You would know how it is It's just about others Mostly my friends Mostly you. ~R* If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead and rotten, write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Ben Franklin |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I understand your hurt, but even best friends need to communicate....they aren't mind readers, even when we think they should just know, they can't if we don't tell them...powerful first post! Well done  * please check your email for a special greeting! "...and she swears there's nothing wrong |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! This was a great first post and im looking forward to reading more from you hopefully in the near future....i'm sorry to hear about your current situation but i also do agree with sea...even best friends do need to communicate because if you stayed friends all that time for a reason ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is s great poem. I think it puts what a lot of friends go through sometimes into words . . . Great job! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah this is what happened between me and my best friend a few months ago so I can really relate to your poem.But I guess eventually everyone has to grow apart so I hope thinfgs get better for you.And I really like this poem and can't wait to read more of your work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wonderful poem! I enjoyed it. A good first pippost. Welcome new friend! I know what you're going through, something happend with a dear friend of mine for over three years that's similar. It hurts, but time will heal wounds, trust me. Not completely, but enough to move on to new friends, new people. Good luck, and hope to see more of you here and on teenchat. Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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Belle19 Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19California |
Very Nice, I really liked it. I am going through the same exact thing with my best friend, well ex. Whatever you want to call it. Keep up the good work, and hang in their. :-) "If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change the way you think about it" :-) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wonderful writing my dear! I can't say that I know where you're coming from, but you described your hurt very well. Welcome to Passions! You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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just_me Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 19 |
I like they way you wrote this.. it brings out the feelings that you have. Very well done... very easy to relate to... Thanks for the write! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
We all go through that stage in life but one day you will find someone that is meant for you to trust and be good friends with... Have you ever heard the say, "falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, and falling out of love is when the piece no longer fits" Well its just like friendship... If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with" [This message has been edited by ERIN (01-09-2002 06:17 PM).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry I'm so glad you decided to joing us here Wonderfl first post... I enjoyed it, and I look forward to seeing much more.Again, welcome --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
Very nice poem! I know exactly what you were saying cause the same thing happened to me a few years ago. Please keep writing A life without love…is no life at all. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This is indeed a very well-expressed poem. Sad, of course, but I hope you will soon work out the differences you have with your friend. Talk it out! You never know how much can be worked out when 2 friends talk over a cup of coffee. Trust me _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Hmm Im exactly going through that right now..she doesn't listen and I don't know why I hang on..she says she has no time and yet she hangs out with her new bf and friends from work and has no time for me..and when I explained this to her she got upset..but this was good...really it was... Kristen |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Sometimes people are so caught up in there own problems, they don't see how much we are hurting. Best friends are human beings too, and they have faults. Talk to your friend, tell her you care, because fights just make you stronger, and a strong relationship really helps at the ages we are now. Next time you are screaming with your mouth closed, gice some kind of hand signal, because if she knows your in trouble, she'll try to help! LCBS I was drowning in my own tears, until you threw me a life preserver |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Welcome to Passions!!! Ya I know I'm a little late. Good first post, I can really feel where you are coming from. You expressed your emotions quite well. Also I loved the quote from Ben Franklin.ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
i know exactly how you feel, my "best friend" is doing the same thing to me. she's got to much goin on in her life to be a friend to me, but im always there for her. i know it hurts and i know it makes you mad but sometimes you just gotta let it go, i'm lost without her but i know one day she'll wake up and realize what's she doin to her best friend and she'll feel bad, you just gotta wait till she comes around. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to Passions. This was a wonderful first post. Like the others, I can relate to this. Me and my best friend of over 2 years are, lets put it this way, not best friends anymore. But you shouldnt give up on your friend, b/c sometimes 2 people want the exact same thing w/out stopping to realize it. Maybe she wants you to hear her too. But either way, I hope that everything works out for you. You really shouldnt throw away something as precious as a friend. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i'm sorry to hear about your situation and welcome to piptalk i hope to read more of your work! =D as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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