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Ree Ree
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 56
providence, RI

0 posted 2002-02-05 04:28 PM


It was just one minute ago
that i held you
It was sixty seconds ago
that i smiled, things were good
and everything felt safe
just as it should
but now i'm here
i'm watching you leave

It was one hour ago
that was kissed
It was sixty minutes ago
when i felt so happy
I never thought that I
could feel loved and so free
but nowi'm here
it's dark, I"m alone.

I think it's dumb how i can't
seem to live without you
This whole dependence thing
is getting really annoying
I"ll see you soon so why
does it hurt, when i watch you leave
for only a day

It was just one day ago
that I looked into your eyes
it was 24 hours ago
when i fell, it was love
and no one else had seen
but the starts up above
i just can't wait to see you again

I think it's dumb how i can't
seem to live without you
This whole dependence thing
is getting really annoying
I'll see you soon so why
does it hurt, when i watch you leave
for only a day...

© Copyright 2002 maria - All Rights Reserved
Ree Ree
Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 56
providence, RI
1 posted 2002-02-05 04:29 PM


This is a really old one, it's actually a song, i'm not quite sure why i posted it...but whatever...
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