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Insane, With a Cane
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Insane, With a Cane |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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I saw an old man walking down the street, Mumbling about the nearby creek. Long messy hair, Living without a care. I watched him walk around, Wearing a Burger King crown, Dozenly tattooed, With a shirt, “I have canoed.” He asks, “Bif Naked, Bif Naked, Why’s she never naked?” He totes a rubber ducky, Winks, thinks he’s lucky. He dances ‘bout madly, “You all live so sadly.... Yeah, I get booty!” I offer my smoothie. Turns, ”Shut up you fool! Get back on your stool!” Back to me, “Sorry Charlie, Too much barley.” He laughs, grins a grin, Then sighs, “I have sin.” He looks above, Says, “On Mars, they sure love.” He looks at me, "Son, only you have seen.” If you share this scene, Don’t be obscene.” I never saw him after that, But I’m sure I will, with another funky hat. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Couldn't stand to look at the 0 responses....great job, can't wait to read more ~LCBS |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
LOL, Titus, you did it again, you nonsensical prodigy.  -Leah |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Titus... *shakes head*... I'm at a loss for words... ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!! What Leah said. Thanks for sharing you geek you  I am slowly going crazy... one two three four five six switch... crazy going slowly am I... six five four three two one switch... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ohh Titus!! What are we gonna do with you  LOL...a very entertaining poem BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Thanks so much! I appreciate all that. I fetl like being insane with this one. LoL. I guess it worked. Anyhow, thanks again. Sincerely, Titus Let the music set you free. |
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