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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2002-02-05 02:33 PM

Lurking in the dark,
Ignore the dog's bark.
Hear a faint and silent shriek,
Hunt down all those that are weak.
Eyes rolled back in his head,
Heard everything he said.
Watching with every stride,
Appearing to silently glide.
Reach out slowly for another soul,
Watch as you sink back into your hole.
Gazing through the glass,
Devoured souls flock in mass.
Watching and learning,
You sit back yurning.
Yurning for a way out,
Can't escape The Scout.
Cry for you through tears of blood,
As I see your carcass in the mud.
Knowing there's no way out,
No escape from The Scout...
No escape from destiny..
There's no escape from darkness,
There's no escape....
From Me.

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-05 06:38 PM

Kyle, very cool write!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-02-06 10:44 AM

No escape from destiny..
There's no escape from darkness,
There's no escape....
From Me.

I cant tell you how many times the same feelings ran through my mind...::Hugs::

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-02-06 03:28 PM

Dark, and intruging. Nicely done.

The Titus

Let the music set you free.
- Carlos Santana

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

4 posted 2002-02-07 11:25 AM

thank you all, i try and keep people readin even though i dont come here much to write anymore, i suppose they dont wanna read my stuff too much anymore, i know ive scared a few people so they just wont read mine but thats alright...thanks much

Put youself together using paste, My life you can't taste, how i despise you push me again for your own demise

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2002-02-09 06:56 AM

"Cry for you through tears of blood,
As I see your carcass in the mud."

this is a very good piece of poetry kyles...again the only thing i see as hindering it is your rhyming...try a maybe varying it a little like an abab one. but apart from that i love this...very good imagery...well done!

life's not about who wins or loses, or about whos got the better car,or the most money. it's about living,and trying to make the best of what we have.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

6 posted 2002-02-09 09:01 PM

This is a great piece.

Dawn

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