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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-02-04 05:31 PM


For Allison, we love you always and forever

Today the unthinkable happened
While we were sitting in class
A hushed phone call rang
bringing silence filled wrath

But I had to be strong
For her sake they said
and I had to be strong
for all of my friends

Today was the infamous wake
in the aftermath of hundreds of tears
and as I dressed in my mourning black
I felt like I had aged millions of years

But I had to be strong
For her sake they said
and I had to be strong
for all of my friends

Today was the typical funeral
a dark,rainy,dreary,dismal day
and I watched all these mourners
with nothing to say

But I had to be strong
For her sake they said
and I had to be strong
for all of my friends

We all lost a loved one
who never did a thing wrong
and we sit here in hysterics
Singing our own mourning songs

But I had to be strong
For her sake they said
and I had to be strong
for all of my friends

But Euogy began all to quickly
and I lost all my stregth
As I broke down in floods of tears
I lost all my faith

I was supposed to be strong
but I was grieving too
and I couldn't keep up
Trying to support all of you


~LCBS



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1 posted 2002-02-04 06:27 PM


I know how this feels.  I lost a close friend in 2000 and I didn't go to the funeral... even now I wish I had.  I hope you feel better and great job with expression.  You expressed how I felt, how I still feel about my friend dying.  Good job.
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2 posted 2002-02-04 08:06 PM


the ache and sadness radiates from your words....the emotion you present made tears come to my eyes....*hugs* to you
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3 posted 2002-02-05 01:44 PM


Hold on a second and lemme go fetch a tissue....**grabs a box of Kleenex and finds her way back to her chair**...no joke hun you brough tears to my eyes! I recently went through an experience like this but i fortunately didnt have to be strong for the gang...i admire and respect you for keeping yourself so composed for the sake of everyone else...::hugs::

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