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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Your words Your magic that you weave To entrace my soul Is unbelievable Constantly I'm consumed And dance amongst the demons In my soul Yet you are able to control My utmost attention I'm forever blessed For destiny To have brought you into my life And to help slowly Unlodge the pain Caused by reoccuring dreams And horrid scenes My soul constanly re-creates One day I hope I can do the same for you But this is all I can do To write these words Expressing my utmost Gratitude... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is really sweet...nicely done Kristine BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
There is love of one type or another in your words, I'll give you that. You write well, possibly because your writing is so close to your heart. I enjoy reading your poems. ..... I sound creepy don't I? Man, sometimes I even scare myself. After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
It can be helpful to have someone to vent to and to help you cope with things. Just don't forget that the person to help you cope may someday need you to help them in return. -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Beautiful  Titus Let the music set you free. |
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