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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
As I lie awake on this dark lonely nite I ponder how our sacred bond began to break. Everything about us just seemed rite, so what came between our deep love? The deadly build-up of rust from this betrayal of trust forces me to shove all that ever mattered to me far away. Now, here alone I lay, emotionally bruised and battered by your incredible ignorance of the simplistic significance your glowing smile had on my pathetic existance. I just can't go on, the pain is way too strong. Wish with me you would stay for just one more sunny day. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a really amazing poem...very well written..good job BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
lone_poet- This is very well penned. You've done a great job of expressing these feelings. I enjoyed reading this.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I agree as well..very nicely written Kristen |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
I think you expressed yourself very well here! "I'm not afraid of anything in this world, |
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