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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2002-01-30 11:07 PM

Never before
have eyes so
deep
stared so long
into my own.
Making me yearn-
wishing to exist
forever
in the eternity
of you.

You are
the warmth
that lights
the
sun

Satisfied
knowing
it was you
that carved the mountains-
and scattered the stars.

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

1 posted 2002-01-31 01:12 AM

although I'm sure this could have religious connotations, I think it makes an Excellent poem about an actual person!! I liked it a lot!!

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2002-01-31 01:15 AM

Very well written piece you have a very special talent.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-01-31 03:26 PM

Beautiful piece here.

C? said it well, so I wont add much. Just, I enjoyed it temendously. Keep it up.

Titus

"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. And inside of a dog, it's too dark to read."
-Groucho Marx

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2002-01-31 03:44 PM

aww i always liked your style. great read as always jenn

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2002-02-01 08:56 AM

nicely done.....quiet thoughts for a quiet friday night in.....or saturday morn..but we wont get into that

...good work

eyes...........feeel...D
rooop
Y
..zzzzz...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2002-02-01 02:43 PM

Beautifully written here hun

Good job!

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2002-02-01 09:17 PM

*starts thinking of someone...*

Beautiful Jenn, as always. Your imagery is quite nice. Great expression and it's good to see a variation in your formatting. Go the creativity.

Thanks for posting.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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8 posted 2002-02-02 11:25 AM

Hey-everyone.

My-spacebar-is-on-sebattical-right-now.

So-I-have-to-reply-in-this-nonsensical-way.
But-I-appreciate-all-of-your-comments-very-much-and-I-would-make-this-longer-but-it's-kinda-annoying.

-hehe

thanks-guys
Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2002-02-04 05:27 PM

Jenn --- this is so beautiful
melodramatic romancing words
*applauds*

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

10 posted 2002-02-23 01:03 AM

...

I still say go back tot he bitter hate poems...

But I GUESS if yu just HAVE to express yourself (

) then have at it...

hehehehe j/k...

Variation is wonderful, I likes.

Share Jesa, Stroke Jesa, Pet Jesa, Love Jesa.

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

11 posted 2002-02-23 01:53 PM

Hey Jenn

I thought this was really beautiful, whether its a tribute to your faith or to a person in your life. Absolutely beautiful.
And how cool are you for having a Lifehouse quote as your signature??? VERY cool! Hats off to you

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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12 posted 2002-02-23 02:18 PM

Thanks guys

My space bar's back wooohooooo

sorry for the delay in the thank yous... I'm glad you all liked it. It actually is about a person, but after I reread it; I can see the religious connotations in it.

Thanks for the insight guys.

Jesa...bitter hate poems eh...? Have no fear, there will always be bitterness under all the bliss... and if I find it again, I'll be sure to compose just for you

jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

13 posted 2002-02-24 01:45 PM

This is simply beautiful!
thank you so much!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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